Thursday, January 29, 2009

Shrimp Sized Confidence Comments

Rating: 4.3

I never said so
but I always believed
you to be a fake
Your lips too perfect
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Ted Sheridan
COMMENTS
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 March 2009

Nice compact poem. Actually an octopus sized confidence.

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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

what a clever write...........................

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Ken E Hall 05 February 2009

Good pun-fake you are'nt and with your confidence you let the bottom feeders out so they would'nt eat your feet- and with 800 poems under your belt you are keeping alzheimers at bay -uavaniceday regards

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Lalitha iyer 03 February 2009

The poem is concise and brief and hence is focussed very sharply. Nice.

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Ana Zaldivar 02 February 2009

Very Beautiful and romantic! I really love it.. great job :) best wishes, ana

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