Shut Up! Poem by Julia Luber

Shut Up!

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Moon, moon that follows tune. Shadow fortress
telling the planet to shhhh, quiet! My web is spun.
My work is done. The dark surrounds you, and it
surrounds me. Black pool named Night thieving the
whole sky- omnipotent, omniscient. Hiding every lie
in its circular commotion. So ordered, tranquil- constructed
consecrated potion. Seducing even animals into sleep.
Of this I whisper, peep-compulsively do over and over.
The moon, a leafless clover- not to pluck, but to Shut Up!

Tuesday, September 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Does this poem remind you of the tone of many of the Indian poets on PH? I mean this as a complimentary tribute, trying to mimic some sense of the chanting rhythmic moon tones!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 11 September 2019

A beautiful poem on the lunar times enjoyed thanks

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James Mclain 10 September 2019

We poet's are very sensitive, Sometimes we think it's all about us until the end Is reached. Great poem Julia.

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Julia Luber 10 September 2019

Thank you for reading and not assuming a certain negativity with those harsh words Shut Up. I meant it to be a wee bit comical?

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Panagiota Romios 10 September 2019

Good poem from one entranced by the heavens. My mind never shuts up. Nature relaxes. Me? No))

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Julia Luber 10 September 2019

Nicely interpreted- shedding light on a poem about the moon. Thank you for reading and responding!

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