She did not smile when I walked down the aisle
I sensed as if she was on a trial
How will she know I am truly nice
What’s instilled in her mind is otherwise
Sigh... make my heart sighs too....this is mind-working your words make my heart sighs... The title itself projects its complete thought and the title alone Sigh, is poetry thank you. happy to read this touching, a little bit abstract..as if a sonnet needs to be analyze whats the conclusion and the meaning behind...wholesome...mysterious..strong yet with a hidden fragility within Im waiting for the next stanza.....*smile*
Like many others, I too am curious to know who she is. Is she your mother in law or his ex? An attractive title for the nice, short poem. A sigh well released, now cheer up!
very good poem, with descriptive elegance. Well done!
is this a wedding? are you takinjg about your new mother in-law? if you are she may never see you for who you truly are.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it is only on faith. faith or trust is most powerful, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems.