There they stood
one and the same,
the open field
and the falling rain-
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So true, sadly so true. I love your mingling of rhyme with smooth flowing free verse, . Smoky, this is exremely well done. My time is running out, but I accept.
WOW Great poem beautifully written love it Such a real message here if only mankind would learn
We all here for just a brief period of time, ashes to ashes and dust to dust.....
This is a very realistic look at life and nature.....definitely makes one think of what is, and what shall be....great poem!
A really great poem, we are all on borrowed time, a lot of us just don't know it.
I love the poem and the bible verse. Which is in itself another poem..life has such perfection doesn't it? ;)