Thursday, November 21, 2013

Sign Of The Blackbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

There they stood
one and the same,
the open field
and the falling rain-
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 10 December 2013

I love the poem and the bible verse. Which is in itself another poem..life has such perfection doesn't it? ;)

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Joseph Anderson 01 December 2013

So true, sadly so true. I love your mingling of rhyme with smooth flowing free verse, . Smoky, this is exremely well done. My time is running out, but I accept.

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Noreen Carden 26 November 2013

WOW Great poem beautifully written love it Such a real message here if only mankind would learn

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Valerie Dohren 24 November 2013

We all here for just a brief period of time, ashes to ashes and dust to dust.....

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Dee Corpolongo 24 November 2013

This is a very realistic look at life and nature.....definitely makes one think of what is, and what shall be....great poem!

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Dave Walker 21 November 2013

A really great poem, we are all on borrowed time, a lot of us just don't know it.

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