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Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Silent

Rating: 4.5
Now I am silent,
Because I think,
I am all spent.

You hear me not,
Because I think,
I am distraught.

The queer drama,
The weird clowns,
Put me in a trauma.

The silence of grave,
Descending slowly,
On a nation so brave!
Khairul Ahsan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dhaka
17 December 2013
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COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 26 January 2015
@Amitava Sur, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your kind thoughts here. I agree to your remarks. Certainly I shall read your poem too.
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Sky Welch 24 March 2014
Oh how inspiring. My Fiance might like this poem. It reminds me of Wicca in a way.
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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018
Dear Sky Welch, I hope your fiance will find some time to read this poem and leave a comment, as you did. Thank you for the comment.
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Amitava Sur 15 February 2014
Yes it's better to remain silent in the undone situation. But definitely those weird clowns can not remain long.... nice penning You may read my poem Killing myself.
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Carol Fleming Klein 24 January 2014
I enjoy the imagery captured in the brevity of your words, particularly in this poem. I don't pretend to understand all the references in your imagery, but they lead one inevitably a heartbeat at a time into your final image.
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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018
Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here, @Carol Fleming Klein. Much obliged.
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Khairul Ahsan 13 January 2014
@Valsa George, Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem.
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Khairul Ahsan 13 January 2014
@Bhavna, Thanks for your appreciative comment on my poem.
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Bhavna Singh 13 January 2014
gud one keep writing ahead
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Shama T. Bukhari 09 January 2014
Silence echoes in the heart..a beautiful narration of your thoughts explained very clearly... Now I am silent, because I think I am all spent, it says all. You are a great writer of poetry.. Keep it up..best wishes.
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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2018
Your kind appraisal has inspired me a lot, @Shama T.Bukhari. Such inspiring words encourage poets to write better poems as days go by. Thank you very much, dear poet.
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 02 January 2014
Silence is wonderful for our attitude.
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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018
Thank you, @Lasoaphia Quxazs, for reading the poem and sharing your thought. Much obliged.
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Marvin Brato 24 December 2013
Silence clears the mind, it excites realization that life is never perfect so do whatever it needs to survive!
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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018
'Silence clears the mind' - a nice thought that made me think over. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem, dear poet @Marvin Brato.
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