Silent Suicide Poem by willo willo

Silent Suicide

Rating: 4.6


Everyday I have cried
Wishing, I'd died
Every time I confide
They never seem kind
They look at me crazy
Like, i'm losing my mind
Perhaps I should lie
Never say that i cry
Hide my emotions
Put them aside
Commit a silent
suicide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 25 July 2021

That is a nice poem dear, Willo. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 21 July 2021

Really a poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions.....

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Luis A. Estable 21 July 2021

Yes, there`s an outpouring of feelings in this but on the side of prose rather than that of poetry. I don`t want to be negative, but if you take care of the verses, this could turn out being more like a poem.

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