Saturday, June 27, 2009

Silken Words. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bathed at first in milky dreams, creamy
Smooth flowed your silken words to me,
Drenching my heart, and without too
Much sweet-talk I, aware that you
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Fay Slimm
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Susan Bagley 08 July 2009

We feed from parts of the same fate.... wow, I loved this poem Fay. I am so glad we are now friends for I can see upon being introduced to your work, that I will enjoy reading your silken words. I so envy those who are gifted with freeverse. I know you will inspire me. Susan

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Ejaz Khan 05 July 2009

An excellent write! Enjoyed it.

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very beautiful piece indeed milady........

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Bob Gibson 27 June 2009

Twas not what was said, twas the lilt in the voice that makes our heart strings, truly rejoice the eyes cloud over, lost in the mist two lovers entwined, as gently they kissed Young love never grows old! beautiful poem Fay

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Carl Harris 27 June 2009

This is a very lovely and heart touching write, Fay, as it is clearly written from the experience and joy of love. Even for those of us who are, shall we say 'more mature', it is love of another that makes life and romance worth while. Your fine poem beautifully expresses those feelings. Carl.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'Silky soft words Catch the spirit of love at first, Then, with time words harden to stone, ' Fay, what a wonderful observation! Amazing! Excellent poem, enjoyed a lot.

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James Mclain 27 June 2009

it is in your very own words silkies of most heavenlies amazing grace as it covers your soul and make your heat blossom and bloom for he is to bold so you hold...iip

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