Silver Bird Poem by Rod M.Peters

Silver Bird



I drag my feet through nameless streets
Wasting away in the throes
Of metallic death-rattles.
The sound of my soles awakens
A reluctant choir of night phantasms.
I carry a sack of painted masks
That weighs me down heavily.
Punctured gutters drip over stains
Resembling chained ravens
And a spectral face lurks behind
The broken glass of an Oculus window.
I see his one staring cold eye, defiant,
And my own image reflecting on it;

An eye, looking through an eye,
Looking through an eye, looking…
And a fateful hand tears the Moon from the sky
Casting it into a well of forgetfulness.

Upon turning corners there's always
Someone blocking my progress.
I look at his sweaty, strained neck
And his back-borne sack brimming
With fluttering birds struggling
To break free into the night.

I hear voices and see a glimmer of light
Coming out of a murky window pane.
In an old Victorian sitting-room
Wallpaper hangs in tatters,
Tables and chairs in disarray, overturned.
A grave looking figure in a black gown
And scholarly cap rails over something,
Scolding a smiling Harlequin,
Trying pointlessly to catch him
In his torn butterfly net.
Madness mocking Reason, no doubt,
But in the end they agree to a truce
And both drink a glass of Port.

My shadow is caught on a rusty nail.
I leave her begging there and walk away.
A child offers a half-eaten apple
In exchange for my wrist-watch;
I sit down to lunch not knowing what time it is.
The masks pluck up courage and crawl
Out of the sack and into a lidless manhole.

A flock of Origami birds flies
Undoing the cunning spell.
The listless Moon sighs
At the bottom of a well.

An old balding man snatches my hat away
And hundreds of baby rabbits hop free
Out of my hollow head.
Each one recites a poem by heart
And I marvel at the treasure-trove of ideas
Thriving in forced seclusion within my mind.
A year goes by and my face is a dark,
Featureless cavity, until one day, when
Out comes the head of a silver bird.

Again I stumble against the back
Of him who carries the sack of birds;
It's now empty.
No need to ask him to turn around
To know he has my own face.
Finally, I walk past him;
He doesn't recognize me.
I run to rescue the Moon.

Friday, February 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: transcendent,transformation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 18 April 2017

Wow, reading this unfolds like a mini film, your discriptions are so vivid you can see them coiming to life on the screen. great read. Annette

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Rod Mendieta 18 April 2017

Thanks Annette. I was hoping a girl will get it: so far it's only guys commenting! The symbolism of the listless moon in a well and the narrator running to rescue it is a bit of a declaration in favor of rescuing the power of the feminine that a 'fateful hand' (patriarchal society?) once cast into a 'well of forgetfulness'. Of course when a poet explains his poem like that it sounds awfully pretentious! In the end, I just love hearing that you enjoyed it for whatever reason!

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Bri Edwards 26 March 2017

favorite stanza so far: Upon turning corners there's always Someone blocking my progress. I look at his sweaty, strained neck And his back-borne sack brimming With fluttering birds struggling To break free into the night....................i particularly enjoyed the alliterations A grave looking figure in a black gown And scholarly cap rails over something, Scolding a smiling Harlequin, Trying pointlessly to catch him In his torn butterfly net.................maybe grave-looking. i think i saw a Harlequin (duck) in Hokkaido, Japan. Madness mocking Reason ..........this reminds me of Tom Billsborough and me going at it. i, Bri, of course, is Reason! ! ! My shadow is caught on a rusty nail. I leave her begging there and walk away. A child offers a half-eaten apple In exchange for my wrist-watch; I sit down to lunch not knowing what time it is. The masks pluck up courage and crawl Out of the sack and into a lidless manhole..............i like 'silly'. i esp. like the first line. this stanza reminds me of some of the SILLY poems of PH member John Westlake; he has many more which are very serious, not silly. Hark! Rhyming: A flock of Origami birds flies Undoing the cunning spell. The listless Moon sighs At the bottom of a well. And I marvel at the treasure-trove of ideas Thriving in forced seclusion within my mind.............you have certainly let some of them out in this poem! ! i may not remember this poem in a month, but i'll send it to MyPoemList now. maybe it should be in a showcase? bri :)

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Rod Mendieta 27 March 2017

Sure Bri, you'll do me an honor featuring this one in the next Showcase! That in itself is like badge of honour for me and, let's be honest, we're all here like little children starving for recognition, right?

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Unwritten Soul 25 February 2017

You know, when i read this what comes to my mind is like series of a story, i really wanted to let you know that i like the way you build the image, the flow thats amazing! as if it let my imagination soar in every line you shared there :)

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Rod Mendieta 27 February 2017

Hi Soul, so glad to see I'm doing something that creates enjoyment for others and perhaps also helps to convey meaningful ideas, even when the full comprehension requires some delving into symbology, history, alchemy, etc. In this case the bird being silver actually relates to the Moon symbolism, and the Moon relates to the Goddess and the power of the feminine, somehow subjugated and even thrown into a well of forgetfulness in modern society. Layers upon layers of meaning: that's what makes a poem great in my opinion. Warm regards to you... Rod

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San José, Costa Rica
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