Single Waters.... Poem by karen sinclair

Single Waters....

Rating: 5.0


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We are
.... insignificant droplets

Water draining to a disused well
Screaming individuality
Yet (one starling) dancing on thermals
Is unseen
(Unknown) ...

As unknown as...
A mother trapped in one teardrop
Screaming silently
Forever at her newborn loss
Screaming
Wailing
To
And
Fro
Within time
As all others
Just slips into the well of
Thee forgotten
Pain
Except for her memory stored
By those who bore witness
So long ago

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Drip
.......
Drop
.........
Droplet
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Chandeliers of tears
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So long
Forgot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 05 December 2013

an interesting title.. and so was the poem, , , , nice, ,

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Smoky Hoss 25 October 2013

The pathos and metaphoric elements combine perfectly; this poem flows as well as good water! Definately a poem of living...

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Martin Mclean 23 October 2013

The sense of loss is so powerfully expressed by the metaphor of dripping water, relentless, punctuated by pain but ending in a weary resignation. A very fine poem.

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Danny Draper 15 October 2013

A beautiful metaphor of existentialism - droplets of water draining into a disused well. We at our lowest possibly to feel disuse, at least used we are connected. Sad and poignant.

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