Sinking Ship Poem by Dr. Lourdes Vijayan R

Sinking Ship

Rating: 5.0


No flee, agonizing ache surrounded
Almost done, no finance rest to face the world
Empty handed partner, sleeping prestigious article.
Nothing rest, except my heart beat.
Beating for you, our priceless avow Reayan

Plain me handed over to my populace, believed to be easy
Untold toil wherever landed, unable to revive,
Stabbing words of your side, Lied to marry
Mentally never thought, lost everything pricey
Not my partner, since you are priceless.

Ornamentally imposed all, now paining
Carrying me, painful me, unable to shoulder my people
Loved ones yours, spreading wherever, lied me to marry
Love, never ever met you before the wedding tête-à-tête
Initial days, forwarded hands found, now paining words forwarded.

Grasp the impermanent money, Grasp my persistent love.
Never failed to mind my mind, never failed to mind your love
Attended once, "you wanna depart from me everlastingly"
The hammered broken heart bled, sensed the stoppage of blood.
Requested heart pleaded, Oh brain not think again.

Wheezing occurs; Let him be for a while
Denied mind declined the plead
Sleepless nights waiting to kill, eye balls wept, thinking of no rest
Insecurities of job circuitously declared, partner provisionally departed.
Revengeful mind showcased, rejoiced to be having electivity

Swindling Lourdes lied, Lourdes! everyone uttered
Not me, Not lied, Not Swindled, Not deceived
True me attempted to prove me
The stamped name aroused everywhere
The lied Lourdes in the voice of two-faced people

Hoping day not far my dear
Betrayal family rest, still in the offing for betrayal
Strengthen me emerge with burly potency
Mighty power fortunate with plenty of money
Lied Lourdes would be trustworthy and gratified

- Dr. Lourdes Vijayan

Sinking Ship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem of disappointment after the marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 06 June 2022

Amazing poem to read on rejection of heart felt love! Tres bien!

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Good poem, expressing disappointment of a deceived heart. Exuding pensive sadness. Top score

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Thank you for the comments

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