Sky Is All Yours Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha
Sky Is All Yours
Yesterday’s gone
like disappearing clouds
like vanishing stars
like passing twilight
like fading moonlight
Leaving memories
of stress and fun
of rest and run
of hope and despair
of scare and care
It’s the time
to reflect on past glories
to bury bitter memories
to match a flowing stream
to catch the next dream
So, my friend!
grab with both hands
happiness is all yours
give wings to your dreams
sky is all yours
(Dedicated to one of my friends who is going to pursue his post graduation at a very reputed university. Wishing him a successful journey ahead.)
Excellent extended simile: Yesterday’s gone like disappearing clouds like vanishing stars like passing twilight like fading moonlight and excellent visual surrealistic metaphor: give wings to your dreams Excellent symbolistic poem, very well expressed 10++++++++++++
We must grab all of life's opportunities with both hands. I wish your friend well as he continues his studies.
Deependra you have a wonderful way with words...I have said it before and I say it again... you are an excellent poet... thanks for the invite Regards Alf
yes the sky is all yours...meaning you are free to dream, to do something about it, to face its chalenge, and of course to be what you are after all... the poem is an expression of deep concern to someone (as your dedication stated) ...however, it should be noted that freedom is always something you are bound with, 'we are born free, to be found in it'...thanks for the poem.
'...........................time to reflect on past glories to bury bitter memories to match a flowing stream to catch the next dream'... quoted lines are poetic good...bring in a wish an attitude that's good...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 6:11:27 AM # 1.0.0
Sincere wishes from heart The poetic rhythm impart. CP