Sleep Inside Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sleep Inside

Rating: 5.0


Tongue, o, tongue
Nothing in praise is sung
You are boneless weapon
You need severe action

You spoil relation in minute
Its effect can not dilute
The damage is already done
You are mouthed once again

You have safe place to hide
Only teeth can divide
Can crush if you dare
So never venture

You know nothing
About etiquette or something
You speak where it is not required
Person gets annoyed and tired

You do unusual things
Many kingdoms were lost by kings
You made it still worse
They were put on donkey instead of horse

Such honor and dishonor
And damage so severe
That you were needing full control
At wrong time no more call

So sleep inside box
Or else you will create hoax
You will be acting like headless mind
Someone may lament only when he finds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

Tongue, o, tongue Nothing in praise is sung

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Hazel Durham 06 August 2013

Very entertaining about a tongue that's wild and causes havoc with often permanent damage to the victim! Superb write!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

Some Girl Yes this is true, very much

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Tribhawan Kaul 06 August 2013

Yes, very true. The tongue can build but can wreck havoc any time. Happy writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

The Tongue Bobby Childress12 minutes ago The poem conveys the poisonous effects of words spoken and the tongue. Comment +1 Masterpiece! I loved it!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

14822 RachelB15 minutes ago Excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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