Thursday, July 17, 2008

Sleeping On A Blade Of Grass Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are those gentle sleepy suicidal dreams
from which you can never awaken reborn.
Embedded like soft gelled inserts
in the soul of a favorite pair of shoes,
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Ted Sheridan
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Thad Wilk 17 July 2008

Those rough roads we travel, those soft jelled inserts, do help - the soul! *10*! ! Best regards Ted! Friend Thad

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Chuck Audette 17 July 2008

Fun puns in this, but I almost lost them in the lovely lyrical language. Be careful of sleeping on those sharp blades! -chuck

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Anita Atina 17 July 2008

This poem runs like a hot knife thru butter... among the best poems i have read on PH

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I absolutely love the play on soul/sole here. And you must show me where to buy those inserts. :) t x

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