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Slipping Away

Rating: 4.7

I’m Slipping Away
I might be gone today
But you are trying to save me
I’m glad for everything you gave me
And I’m trying to keep that in mind
But there’s something always pushing me back
Trying to make me a blown away chaff
But I can’t runaway from you
And I know you want to know whom
Is making it hard for me

Don’t you see
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Kurt Rees 01 March 2007

i loved this one... i felt a few lines could have made this stand out, but overall a great piece of work

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Hey, that's a good poem, great work smiles n hugs Rissa: -)

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