Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Slivers Of Silvery-Gold. - Poem by Fay Slimm

With sun now subsiding
Over horizon,
I gaze in sheer wonder
At what comes to me.
Channel of mystery
Narrowly opens
Atop ebbing waters
Of candy-floss sea.

A pathway of silver
Waving it's glazes,
Inviting my pleasure
With wet molten gold.
The sun is still trying
More dusky colours,
When most reluctantly
I take myself home.


Comments about Slivers Of Silvery-Gold. by Fay Slimm

  • (7/8/2009 5:20:00 AM)


    Lovely descriptive write, I too like to gaze at the sun setting, making a new picture every day,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (7/8/2009 5:12:00 AM)


    just lovely fay i would not want to go either (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 23, 2009


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