Smoke Poem by Rob Lamberton

Smoke

Rating: 5.0

S ky so dark and gloomy
M ountain blaze consuming
O der is in the air
K eeping some in despair
E verywhere everywhere

Thursday, January 29, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,despair
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written September 1,2021
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koffi B Sossou 11 February 2026

Imagine this smoke going into your lungs!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2026

A brilliant depiction of a consuming fire and its effect. Great acrostic write.

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Timber Koleden 30 January 2026

It was written a while back!

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Timber Koleden 30 January 2026

A perfect alliteration for SMOKE! It names all the perfectly dislikable aspects of that hazy residue! Thank you for sharing this cleverly crafted piece!

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Isadora Quagmire 29 January 2026

Brilliant short work! ! ! You really do excellently explain the essence of smoke : )

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