Beware young sparrow
A handsome foe strikes quickly
Winged god of the sky
Petite soaring on soft wind
Yet not with empty talons
Simply wonderful write with picturesque poetic narration. Wow!
But I don't think this is a RIDDLE: 'A proposition so framed as to exercise one's ingenuity in discovering its meaning; an ambiguous, complex, or puzzling question offered for solution; an enigma; a dark saying. Anything abstruse, intricate, paradoxical, or puzzling; a puzzle.'
Hmm, it seems to fit that definition, doesn't it? I intended it to be a riddle. In some ways most poems seem like they have an element of riddle to them. Isn't that part of their charm?
Yes Michael, herb I've tried to include clues that allow for identification of a specific species.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I see death stalking life to grab it and everything in between seemed like just a dream. Awesome reminder...5***
Thank you for the brilliant feedback!