Skyfall (A Riddle To Solve) Poem by Rob Lamberton

Skyfall (A Riddle To Solve)

Rating: 5.0


Beware young sparrow
A handsome foe strikes quickly
Winged god of the sky
Petite soaring on soft wind
Yet not with empty talons

Skyfall (A Riddle To Solve)
Monday, January 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: riddle poem,Riddle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Consider Isaiah 14: 12-14; Ezekiel 28: 15-17; Revelation 12: 7-9
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 28 January 2024

I see death stalking life to grab it and everything in between seemed like just a dream. Awesome reminder...5***

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2024

Thank you for the brilliant feedback!

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PREMKUMAR C N 20 February 2023

Simply wonderful write with picturesque poetic narration. Wow!

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2024

Premkumar, I am honored by your words, thank you!

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Bri Edwards 28 January 2023

But I don't think this is a RIDDLE: 'A proposition so framed as to exercise one's ingenuity in discovering its meaning; an ambiguous, complex, or puzzling question offered for solution; an enigma; a dark saying. Anything abstruse, intricate, paradoxical, or puzzling; a puzzle.'

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Rob Lamberton 28 January 2023

Hmm, it seems to fit that definition, doesn't it? I intended it to be a riddle. In some ways most poems seem like they have an element of riddle to them. Isn't that part of their charm?

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Bri Edwards 28 January 2023

Kestrel/'Sparrow Hawk'

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Rob Lamberton 28 January 2023

Yes. Great Job! And thank you for stopping by and for commenting!

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Michael Hopkins 27 January 2023

An Eagle or Hawk seeks the sparrow

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Rob Lamberton 27 January 2023

Yes Michael, herb I've tried to include clues that allow for identification of a specific species.

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