Snake Vs Rat Poem by Luz Hanaii

Snake Vs Rat

Rating: 5.0


Sugar and crumbs
snake smells a rat.

Once guided to take a risk with you,
now instructed to stay away.
I learned and passed the test.
Emotional disconnect.

I'm glad you've changed,
nice offer, but no thanks!
I'm good!

No hard feelings,
wish you well,
Good luck!

Thursday, December 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: growth,learning,test
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 18 December 2019

Bernard, I thank you for your support. Blessings!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2019

A perceptive and insightful poem, dear Ma’am Luz.....10++

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