Glass Idol Poem by Luz Hanaii
Glass Idol
With tender whispers I disclosed my soul
From all others, I made him my first love.
With eyes of love, a new world...Behold!
The spring of youth, screaming scents
And brilliant colors aggressively declared
That love like this would just once be.
My love was pure, yet not returned,
My bleeding heart..., his infidelity...
I never thought I would survive,
The pain, the tears, my Ecstasy!
I lived, I loved, I cried...
But when at last, the Glass Idol was gone
I thanked The Lord for a heart like mine.
Luz, such a heartfelt poem of the day....congrats for being chosen...huge 10++++
Bernard, thank you. I have a hard time navigating this site. I used to be in Poet Freak, which program I found easier. I was surprised to find out my poem was chosen... Best regards!
A lovely poem in which you expess superbly. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide
God's Blessings in Abundance for you. I repeat here again: you are my oldest friend (in period not in age) in Poetry! I am very happy to 'meet' you again now.5 Stars! And to My Favourites.
2) Truly, this poem has already become an Immortal Poem. You have brought Light to Poem Hunter's brandnew Home page, dear Luz, the site got its brandnew beautiful face on the 24 Dec 2020
I am very proud of you, dear Luz that you are chosen as TMPOTD thrice. How it was chosen, I don't know either, but after having been chosen Thrice, I reagrd this as an Immortal Poem
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Luz.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:51:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Yet not returned! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks, best regards to you....