Snakes Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Snakes

Rating: 5.0


</>The grass flowers smell
That was amazing

I can`t stay in Hole
I Dragged

The Rock grass bed
The Breeze and Cool

Who called me
Who forced me

I dont know
And my long tongue

The only Grass Bed
The Yellow Sea

I touched her Tongue
Our Eyes and Neck

We rolling in the sea
Yellow only Yellow

In my tender age my mother always told me in mid winter eve, Do not go the rock grass bed for playing there were snakes on the perticular time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marria Attar 13 December 2008

Wow...you're use of words are very understanding-liked it!

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Fiona Davidson 16 December 2008

Another great write...love this one...thank you

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 August 2011

Yellow venom........terrific write felt the serpentine air inside this one.A good and poignant write.

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Rekha Mandagere 30 July 2011

How beautifully you have brought out the snake's response to its lovely surroundings! Rural people's life and their awareness of nature, their predictions are all highly valuable to decide many things in life. Lovely poem. Marks 10+++

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Surya . 14 October 2009

a beautiful poem, beautified by the memmory o mother and child hood. voted10 surya

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 15 March 2009

THIS IS REALLY GOOD, VINODUK.

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Tara Chettur 21 December 2008

as i am frm south india, i could excatly get what the crux of poem is very nice poem!

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Vinod Kumar U K

Vinod Kumar U K

kannur-kerala-India
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