Shape Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Shape

Rating: 5.0


</>A man creats his God
As much as he can
And creats his Ghost
as worst as he can

An elephent dreamt it`s God
As like as it can
And imagine its Ghost
As worst as it can

A dog thought it`s God
As much as it can
And Thought it`s Ghost
As worst as it can

A flower view its God
As beautiful as it can
And Saw it`s ghost
As bad as it can

Anybody can`t live
Without the God and Ghost

Tuesday, January 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 25 August 2011

Superb write and hats off to the pen which created this one.One of your best and thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 December 2009

Yeah I agree and duality is the synchrony and harmony…and you’ve shown it… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kesav Easwaran 09 January 2009

God and Ghost...good and bad...reflect in every thing around us...in every thing man does...a well thought out write...10

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Fiona Davidson 06 January 2009

Good strong write Vinu...thak you

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Vinod Kumar U K

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kannur-kerala-India
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