Snowflake Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Snowflake

Rating: 3.9


All the letters - that is written on a moonlight...
The melancholy secret accompanies...
Betrayed in the hand, the thin hand ceases...
Boundless calmnesses breathes... in pink.
On eyelash a snowflake shone and shivered...
Through heart footpaths- fly,
Now - rest on an eyelash to you...

17.01.09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 27 January 2009

You describe so much in ust a few lines Tsira...beautiful 10+++....thank you....Fi

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Andrew Blakemore 26 January 2009

Beautifully worded Tsira, a really lovely flow to this piece. Best wishes, Andrew

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Lynda Robson 20 January 2009

You have captured the beauty of a snowflake here so well Tsira, romantic and good imagery 10 Lynda xx

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Sandra Fowler 19 January 2009

Snowflakes and moonlight what could be more romantic? You have a unique gift for creating memorable moods. Applause for you. And thank you for the lovely comment on my work as well. Warmest regards, Sandra

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