So Long Ago Poem by Lynn W. Petty

So Long Ago

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Upon the fly-leaf of this tiny book,
She had inscribed:

"To thee, who lost a love as I,
Allow this little book of living song
To bring thee solace, and the comfort
That is thine, to know thou livist not alone,
To bear a burden such as mine.
Addie Marketier,1853."

As if it were a live, hot coal
That seared my heart,
I held this little book of love sonnets
That she had held so long ago.
I turned the pages she had turned. I touched
The teardrop stains on lines of verse
That she had underscored,
And left the pressed rosebud
Where it had lain a century or more.

I thought of what the past had wrought
With images of her soul-grief.
I seemed to feel her presence, as a being
Without shape or form.
A disquieting sensation sat upon my heart,
That she had lived in solitude
Within the shadow of the shatter
Of her dreams.

There is no separation between the soul
And its deep pain, except the grand sweep
Of passing time, which does not erase
But, only softens sorrow.

Saturday, January 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 March 2016

ok, I now see 129 listed. “A disquieting sensation sat upon my heart, That she had lived in solitude Within the shadow of the shatter Of her dreams. There is no separation between the soul And its deep pain, except the grand sweep Of passing time, which does not erase But, only softens sorrow.” some nice alliterations, above. ssssssses galore! you old softie! if she had had television, internet, and a microwave oven, they might have done a better job of softening the sorrow. bri :) maybe not. “

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Manonton Dalan 16 January 2016

very nice poem ////////////

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2016

Softness of sorrows sweeps the memory. Very amazing sharing done definitely.10

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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