Within My Heart Poem by Lynn W. Petty

'Within my heart there is a place, Where you, a living memory, Reside with all your pleasing grace, And shall through out eternity.' wonderful sentiment, I love the enduring eternity of this thought

you reside there with pleasing grace. very nice expressions. so much of love and passion expressed in simple and short verses. thank you. tony

Lies the muse of love. Nice work.

Have to tell you I love your style of writing, it's very intense and meaningful! Cannot stop reading it, I want to find out what you will say in your next poem, and the one after that, your feelings and emotions are deeply felt, touching my heart in depths of being. Short but very touching and meaningful once again. Thank you for sharing, please continue writing of what's in your heart, very beautiful! RoseAnn

Thank you for sharing this living memory. It's nice poem.

Within my heart there is a place, Where you, a living memory, Reside with all your pleasing grace, And shall throughout eternity. - - - - - - - - Beautiful! ! So profound in so few words.

Profound feelings elegantly encapsulated with a wonderful command of the language. Great lines! A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Lynn.

One lives in memory, and you're lucky to have got an eternal love :)

gee, i read this and commented last year, but i read it again and see i did not mention earlier that i think throughout is more proper than through out. in fact i'm not convinced that through out is ever proper. is it? ? ? it sounds like throw out. bri :) i've noticed several 'british-influenced' poets breaking up words e.g. some thing, not something, and else where, not elsewhere, in cases where i would NOT use two words for one. you weren't raised in U.K. or India, were you? well, more importantly, it is THE THOUGHT which counts in the poem. what a lucky gal!

With all your pleasing grace you reside and remain in me all through the eternity. very fine poetic expressions. short and sweet. tony