So Obvious Poem by David Sabo

So Obvious



Is it fair to say
the games you play
are obvious

push me away

I wont always be here
to fade your fear
everytime you call
im against a wall
cos i wont open the door for me too fall

again

I make you smile
and your good for awhile
and your gone for a while

again

next time you need a pick me up
I wont pick you up
i had enough

goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy J-Jordan 03 February 2010

I love it! Sounds like a toxic relationship full of emotional abuse. I can soooooo relate! ! ! Your writing has a nice, smooth flow too!

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Viola Grey 09 January 2010

some things don't become obvious until we say them out loud...I like this, I don't know if you're convincing yourself or someone else...nice write.

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Miranda Stoltz 31 December 2009

That was creative. I liked it :)

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