Heart to heart
Conjoin…
Separation?
Don’t even think
About it
You remove one…
The other
Still living
But…
Paralyzed
For life
See what you have done…
Have some heart
Perform me
Euthanasia
Free me
Alas…
Hi Ameer. very strong for your first peice well put together with a powerful message plain to see. well worthy of a 10 Regards Dave T.
Sabash! (well done) i enjoyed reading this poem. a very good poem. keep writing.
Pretty deep... thought provoking... great, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***
nice work it has a power to convey the message of love and loving.
dear ameer, the poem doesn't complicate enough to develop as an independent statement of art or lamentation............!
The title is clever and the thoughts are strong. I confess modern style is not my cup of tea - my head is still buried in the works of older poets, as you can probably tell from my work. As a start it certainly has strength and character, I wish you every success with it, and all those that follow. Patrick
this s a nice one...its not the length of the poem that counts but the meaning...ths is a good start for a promising poems... CHEERS...
A wonderful start. In a little amount of words u seemed to have poured out ur feelings into this poem. It gives of a pretty clear image of what ur trying to say. Excellent piece....Keep writing: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
goood meaningful poem...enjoyed..keep going