Solitary Confinement Poem by Ameer Mcarthur

Solitary Confinement

Rating: 4.7


Heart to heart
Conjoin…
Separation?
Don’t even think
About it
You remove one…
The other
Still living
But…
Paralyzed
For life
See what you have done…
Have some heart
Perform me
Euthanasia
Free me
Alas…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna jonson 28 September 2008

goood meaningful poem...enjoyed..keep going

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David Threadgold 28 September 2008

Hi Ameer. very strong for your first peice well put together with a powerful message plain to see. well worthy of a 10 Regards Dave T.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 28 September 2008

Sabash! (well done) i enjoyed reading this poem. a very good poem. keep writing.

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Emily Oldham 28 September 2008

Pretty deep... thought provoking... great, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Gargi Saha 28 September 2008

Well written. Enjoyed it.

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Jester's P 01 April 2009

nice work it has a power to convey the message of love and loving.

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Feroz Rather 27 January 2009

dear ameer, the poem doesn't complicate enough to develop as an independent statement of art or lamentation............!

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Patrick Ladbrooke 29 December 2008

The title is clever and the thoughts are strong. I confess modern style is not my cup of tea - my head is still buried in the works of older poets, as you can probably tell from my work. As a start it certainly has strength and character, I wish you every success with it, and all those that follow. Patrick

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Naidz Ladia 26 December 2008

this s a nice one...its not the length of the poem that counts but the meaning...ths is a good start for a promising poems... CHEERS...

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Hades Pandemonium 05 October 2008

A wonderful start. In a little amount of words u seemed to have poured out ur feelings into this poem. It gives of a pretty clear image of what ur trying to say. Excellent piece....Keep writing: -)

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