Solitude Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Solitude

Rating: 5.0


Solitude
Sun suffers,
Clouds keep distance.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
SW has approved this one as a Hynaku.

Loneliness is the burning embers gnawing you from inside. That is why SUN is the best image to express the agony of solitude.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Solitude is the best companion

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Beautiful write, it explains the solitude in wonderful way. Its no wonder sun shines even in solitude. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 June 2018

Hi Geetha, There is probably nobody in the world who has not experienced the pangs of solitude. That is why we can easily relate to the feeling. And when we speak about Sun, at the top everybody is alone.. Thank you. For your wonderful words of appreciation.

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I am not well versed with this kind of sophisticated poems and have never attempted it. But i am all praise for those who make an attempt and succeed too. Unni, you are a poet with high calibre. Solitude with such glow of the sun is a wonderful imagery with clouds standing aside at a distance. Beautiful! A full 10

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 May 2018

And thank you for the full 10++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 May 2018

Hi Geeta I am not familiar with tiny poems. As you would have noticed, I write fairly long ones. But, after seeing Susan's Hynaku, I just attempted this. I am elated that you liked it. Thank you.

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Akshita Bindal 26 May 2018

brilliant work of art

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 May 2018

Hi Akshata, Thank you for your wonderful comments. Deeply obliged.

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2018

Solitude Sun suffers, Clouds keep distance- - - -Sun, the most powerful, with bright light also suffers from loneliness as clouds keep distance.A deep meaningful poem ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 May 2018

Hi Bharati, While at the top, everybody is alone. Loneliness is so piercing there. One has nobody to share ons's mind. The Vidhuushaks in the plays of Kalidas is a far cry for a friend. Loneliness is like the FIRE burning sun from inside.

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