Some Time Come Poem by me poet yeps poet

Some Time Come

Rating: 4.8


Life is a slow misery
why bother others
with your misery
you have to face
desires
and kicks equally
just come to me
and
Feel
share
desires or misery
from my misery
you will flee

Monday, March 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,desire,love,misery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 16 March 2021

An untold story is better than the one which shouts on top of its voice, point noted.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 March 2021

One should always try to share love and happiness with all. Sharing pain and sadness makes other unhappy. Nice write.

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Varsha M 15 March 2021

So don't worry there is no dearth of gossipers too they are waiting for your story to be aired right on time to make it supper supper real even with details that you don't know.

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Varsha M 15 March 2021

why bother others with your misery..... these lines attracted my attention. Sharing miseries is always healing. Snd there are always people ready to listen to your story.

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Captain Cur 15 March 2021

Excellent point! No one wants to hear or bear another's woes. We have enough woes to bear ourselves. From my misery you will flee, great closing lines.

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