Sunday, September 11, 2016

Somebody Knocking! Comments

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Listen to the winds tap, against the window. Feel the rattle
of the pains inside. Shut the door and turn the key, skeletons
dance and hide in the shadows of the trees. Oak and maple, family
and roots. Seedling by seedling, the branches it took. Snapping
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Rebecca Navarre
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2016

To protect the family. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2016

Thank You! Edward, For Your Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Poetry! ! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! !

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Kathy Van Kurin 04 December 2016

Rebecca Navarre, Oak and maple, family and roots- seedling by seedling, the branches it took. See the vulnerabilities within our own family and learn. Let us hold one another close. Beautiful writing. Blessings to you. Kathy

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2016

Thank You! Kathy, For Such For Such A Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Writing! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2016

Against the winds tap window feel the sound of knocking. Amazing poem on family topic that is interestingly expressed here.10

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