Sometimes Poem by Jayne Louise Davies
Sometimes
Sometimes i feel alone,
Fond memories make me sad,
I long to go back once again,
To the good times that we had.
Sometimes i see your face,
In my dreams, my favourite place,
This life is not the same,
If only to hear your voice again.
Sometimes i miss you so,
The tears begin to flow,
I need you back again,
This grief holds too much pain.
Jayne Louise Davies
a good mixture of rhyming and not-rhyming lines. Trying to rhyme ALL THE TIME is not always wise, as it can lead to not-so-great lines. ;)
IF my 3 exes were poets, thay might write of their times with me like THIS: 'I DON'T long to go back once again, To the BAD times that we had.' ;)))))
IF this poem is a 'true depiction' of moments of your life, I sent my condolences. But, life ain't perfect, is it. May other activities bring you comfort if you need it.
This poem stands alone as a 'nice read', but for my tastes it 'begs' for a Poet's Notes, even if it is completely 'made up'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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8/28/2026 12:35:26 AM # rel_20260827T145718Z_a0f1bd3
5 stars: ***** bri ;)
Thanks Bri : )