Son, son oh my dear son, dear son,
What are you doing now there?
Are you busy in reading or writing?
Or are you busy in reciting poems?
This is wonder that technology tells,
Within fraction of second it connects,
Wherever you may be in far place,
I know you receive call of affection.
Go on writing your philosophical views,
You see life from deep within in truth,
Writing is perseverance, reading is too,
Observe sea and sky and forest carefully.
You go to seashore and see waves there,
Are you there near sea? Are you singing?
You are pure soul; God is like vast ocean,
Dear son, you connect him in lovely wave.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 July,2017. All rights reserved.
In truth! Works and words. Nice advice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem lovingly penned for a beloved son. It conveys the love, care and concern of a loving father. Very touching and inspiring.10+++
His concerns are greatest since he loves his son so very much, but on the other hand he is not afraid that his son overcomes danger, since God is always nearest to him anytime he connects God. Sublimest devotional,5 Stars Full Vote! God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved spouse.and wonderful family.
Continued: His concerns are greatest since he loves his son so very much, but on the other hand he is not afraid that his son overcomes danger, since God is always nearest to him (to us) anytime he connect God. Sublimest devotional,5 Stars Full Vote
This father loves his son, since he himself has much love got from the Lord and so the love this father has he gives through to his son, as a father who loves his son very much he is asking where his son is and at any place his son is, there he advices him to connect God.
Go on writing your philosophical views, You see life from deep within in truth, Writing is perseverance, reading is too, Observe sea and sky and forest carefully. Wonderful advises to your son. such a great father are you dear Kumaramani. tony
Father loves son. God loves soul. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A Father's words addressed to his son always contain invisible blessings. Great gesture. Great poem. Thanks.