*******son Of Hidden Sun (Lyric) ******* Poem by egi david perdana

*******son Of Hidden Sun (Lyric) *******

Rating: 2.9


son of hidden sun
lead them with invocation
isn't with flying lizard
that will make you more sincere

son of hidden sun
enforce them with patience
isn't by force
that will make you more devout

son of hidden sun
gaze that hates you as best friends
not as enemy
that will make you more love

son of hidden sun
reply they angry with love
isn't with resentment
that will make you more patience

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 August 2008

masterpiece! I like the words, repeating of son of hidden sun and reply their angry with love. keep writing! where from you got your inspiration, brother?

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Chitra - 19 September 2008

apt title for the deep thinking you have

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Talia Anziliero 24 September 2008

Wonderful read. Harmonising words, INGENIUS! I could picture it (sorta, my minds a bit today!) And now I'm going to read MORE!

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Truthful Light Treeclimber 03 January 2009

awesome! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful electric and hot like the sun

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Reshma Ramesh 21 October 2008

loved this one.....well done

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Arwen Lee CW 10 October 2008

At the moment I knew I was abandoned and alone I trapped myself in sorrow and turned my heart into stone Although sunshine is warm; but my heart stays cold, For there's always shadow, resides in my black black heart.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

Wonderful composition. Love it.

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Anjali Sinha 04 October 2008

Egi-the son of the hidden sun in his resplendant glory great write and +10 regards anjalie

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