Songs Of Life (Tanka) - 05 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
Songs Of Life (Tanka) - 05
Million-ships afloat on thy river
Cruel time that waited on the shore
The first love-poem on thee,
On the rising morning Sun's glee
Was written on the heart's blank paper.
The first love poem on thee, On the rising Sun's glee Was written on heart's blank paper........here is the essence of the poem nicely inscribed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
So nice to read the first song on hearts blank paper..awesome lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 6:26:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Even though your poem does not follow (5-7-5-7-7 syllables) , it is still a great poetic tanka.
Thanks dear Mihaela for the great remarks. Thanks again for the reform, I know little about different forms of poetry. I saw this form in one of the poems published here, thought it would be of the pattern A-A-B-B-A, and started experimenting with it. Didn't know about restrictions on syllables. Would keep in mind about your suggestion onwards. Regards. Subhas