Sonnet Of Poems-01: Lost And Found Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sonnet Of Poems-01: Lost And Found

Rating: 5.0


A poem is

A young lady love

Lost in the crowd

Of greedy eyes

That poke into

The veils of privacy

And buttons of shyness


And found

On the day of forgetfulness,

On the full moon of deserted beaches-

That sing songs of melancholy

Emerging out of sad huts with

Lust darkened walls, and floors murky

With moist lips that never kissed.

Sonnet Of Poems-01: Lost And Found
Tuesday, October 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,lost love,love and art,poems,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have lost many poems in the cross roads of my life, all of them were quite beautiful, but perplexed, I don't know why. I have tried in these poems to figure them out, on my own.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Sahoo 17 October 2017

A poem is A young lady love Lost in the crowd Of greedy eyes A poem so nicely penned. A poem compared with lady love. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks dear Sanjukta for the inspiring remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 November 2017

With moist lips that never kissed. Nice one. Great feeling about a poem. 10+ for the sharing

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 17 November 2017

On the day of forgetfulness, On the full moon of deserted beaches- That sing songs of melancholy Emerging out of sad huts with Lust darkened walls, and floors murky With moist lips that never kissed. Thank you sir for sharing this poem 10+++++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 28 October 2017

A poem is A young lady love Lost in the crowd Of greedy eyes lovely poem shard. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks Neetu dear for the inspiring remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 26 October 2017

On the day of forgetfulness, On the full moon of deserted beaches- That sing songs of melancholy Emerging out of sad huts with Lust darkened walls, and floors murky With moist lips that never kissed. A great poem with tons of lovely imageries. 10++++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks dear Neetu for the inspiring remarks.

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Hazel Durham 25 October 2017

Stunning write, so original and I love the exquisite imagery and the way you have expressed with the beauty of your words!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks dear Hazel for the inspiring remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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