Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Sophisticated Willows - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Sophisticated willows,
Dancing under moonlit skies.
Swaying are the willows,
Doing it as one to be done,
Without a leaf in sight.
And I...
Feel the lilting breeze,
Of August winds.
And I...
Witness the ending,
Of Summer begin.

Swaying are the willows...
Doing it as one to be done,
Without a leaf in sight.
Those sophisticated willows,
Dancing under full Moon light.
As I...
Witness the ending,
Of Summer begin.
I...
Feel the last of breezes,
From those August winds.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Sophisticated Willows by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (8/31/2015 6:59:00 PM)


    Wonderful imagery of sophisticated willows are dancing under moonlight sky. Wise and feeling of breeze comes automatically. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015



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