Sorrow Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Sorrow

Rating: 5.0


Me, not me
odor I breathe
not mine.

Me, aim at the sky
ocean is hurt
Me, keep burning within.

Tuesday, October 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrows
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paresh Chakra 26 November 2018

It is a good poem I am reading this poem and enjoy

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2017

Me, not me odour I breathe not mine Me, aim at the sky ocean is hurt Me, keep burning within.sir i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing....10++++

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Rajendra Rout 04 November 2017

Thanku very much sir for your lovely comment

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Binayakumar Mohanty 30 October 2017

Thanks for lovely comments.I loved it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 October 2017

It is the high ambitious life that helps us forget the oceans of sorrow within the heart. To be vast means you know to contain and to conceal but not how to divulge. Thanks for the nice poem, I am sending soon the names of different forms of poetry, correct the poetic form wherever it applies. At first I used to use the forms like ABC, Ballard, Haiku, Limerick without knowing their definition. Now I have almost corrected them. People from our science world care least about forms. Thanks for the poem shared. 10+++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks for suggestions sir. In fact I have never tried to know the names of forms of poems which is a mistake on my part. I will rectify sir.

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