Soul, A Far Off Goal Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Soul, A Far Off Goal

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Body over soul,
No diamond, but coal,
Soul, a far off goal!
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Haiku | 6.10.2017 |

Saturday, February 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,goal,soul
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If only man feels closer to his soul, the conscience. A lot of ills can be eliminated if so. But today body gets higher priority, soul, little or none.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

Thank you both, Gajanan Mishra and Mahtab Bangalee for the feedback

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 February 2019

Soul is goal of BODY! //

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Gajanan Mishra 17 February 2019

A far off goal, great writr

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Soul is subtle...body is gross...through gross let us flight

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

You're absolutely right, body is gross and gross is easily visible. Thank you Prabir Gayen.

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