Mamta Agarwal

Rookie - 0 Points (March 27,1951 / India)

Soul Food- Senryu - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Pigeon on the ledge,
Starved, walks away from seeds; needs
Hugs, love therapy.

Comments about Soul Food- Senryu by Mamta Agarwal

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/7/2010 11:37:00 PM)

    One can live only in love without lavishness---truly depicted
    and i am still a Lavoisier''s oxygen with sleepless nights of Courvoisier brandy to the bonfire within-in cold chilly wintry nights
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  • (12/21/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    without love and all alone appetite we lose.....3 lines which says a lot (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (12/16/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    indeed...all through has been the in thing...

    a beautiful composition...and the symbolic impact of doves and pigeons is not lost

    great lines mamtaji

    cheers and ten
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  • Vidi Writes (12/13/2009 10:41:00 PM)

    Philosophical theme
    Time and again, such state gleam
    How long one can put up with routine realm
    It’s time to move away from basic aim
    Love therapy can help Soul Search System

    Good one.
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/12/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    Mamta, You have suggested the much-needed treatment for ailing human society in this beautiful Senryu. I think pigeons are transforming into your soul food and bringing a phenomenal change to your poetic art...10/10.

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  • (12/8/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    Nice message ma'am....The whole world is starving for love. (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    another pigeon piece...this time style seems pigions work well, walk well with your poem-seed therapy
    nice...the pigeon there is symbolic...10
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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