Soul Mate Poem by meenu gupta

Soul Mate

Rating: 3.5


Blowing wind touch my soul
Then I feel you very close.
The wind that touch my soul
Want to blow back to you
So you can feel me to your close

Blowing wind touch my soul
Then I feel you are saying I love you
The wind that touch my soul
Want to blow back to you
So you can feel I am saying
I love you.

Wednesday, September 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: soul mate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 23 September 2015

It reminded me the famous epic Meghdoot composed by Kalidasa;

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Meenu Gupta 23 September 2015

Thanks, really I am happy, it's first time I shared my poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 September 2015

Love is the key about life! Nice work.

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Liza Sudina 26 September 2015

touch - reedit for touches everywhere - verb single form for the wind. contents - lovely!

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 September 2015

Very nice.Simple and sweet.

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Meenu Gupta 25 September 2015

thanks

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Kelly Kurt 23 September 2015

A lovely poem, Meenu. Thanks for sharing

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Meenu Gupta 23 September 2015

Thanks to appreciate

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

The wind that touch my soul Want to blow back to you So you can feel me to your close so very touching lines of intimate love. very nice poem. thank you

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