Soulofa Poem Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Soulofa Poem

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Soul of a poem suffocates
With heavy dose of ornaments.
Simple and fluent it's flow
Enhances reader's face's glow.

Poems intricate and ornamental,
Dear to just a few luminaries,
Common man and language colloquial
Bind them in the boundaries.

C@ Ratnakar Mandlik

Saturday, November 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 05 June 2019

Brilliant piece. It's true and relevant. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 January 2019

The point of your poem is clear- brevity, yet, world words, words, and more words. Also talk, talk, talk, and little walking the talk. We have more NATO (No Action, Talk Only) members, But who listens?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

Soul of a poem suffocates With heavy dose of ornaments.....so true. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2018

Man and Language! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 03 November 2018

totally agree with you! ! Brevity is a goal to seek for! ! ! well expressed, Ratnakar! ! ! ! ! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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