M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Sound Of Love ♥♥ - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Shall I compare your voice with sweet notes of cuckoo?
Or with the voice of nightingale
Or whistle of a parrot
Or drops of water on tin roof
The melody of love is what I search on
When mother sings lullaby
Angles descend to hear yet they hear not
Thus thy voice resembles mocking bird's voice,
Or is it like Malabar's whistling by a schoolboy
I hear nothing when I see two lovers
Sitting arms in arms without sound
just the silence in between them
When love blossom from the ashes of dunes
There is a complete silence
And this silence is the sound of love.♥

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Sound Of Love ♥♥ by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/22/2016 7:26:00 AM)

    Love and joy! ! With the peace of your mind. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/6/2015 12:08:00 PM)

    Man such a beautiful poem, wondering how you thought about it. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/4/2015 10:53:00 PM)

    You have brought this beautiful poem on love to a fantastic conclusion! 'Silence is the sound of love'...... true! When heart is full, words are few! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/7/2016 1:34:00 AM)

    Thx much Madam...., .

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/4/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    While we hear lovers we get something and hear nothing in surprise. Due to sound of love we feel silence too. Very amazing sharing....10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/7/2016 1:33:00 AM)

    Thx much Sir..........

  • (11/4/2015 3:28:00 AM)

    A poetry in motion, I never thought that somebody will try to explore the possible of finding the sound of love, you did it and the result was ultimate, silence is the sound and language both....Great poem, Asim. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/24/2016 1:20:00 PM)

    Thx much TRA.......

  • Rajnish Manga (11/4/2015 1:04:00 AM)

    Exquisitely carved poetry which enshrines the essential features of love between two loving souls with the concurrence of beautiful nature all around. Great work.
    I hear nothing when I see two lovers
    Sitting arms in arms without sound
    And this silence is the sound of love.♥
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    Thanks much Rajnishji............................

  • Rahman Henry (11/4/2015 12:26:00 AM)

    Really wonderful. I rated it 10++++++........ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/24/2016 1:22:00 PM)

    Thank u so much. Rahman

  • Rahman Henry (11/4/2015 12:25:00 AM)

    Welpenned LOVE-poem. A lovely one. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/4/2015 12:17:00 AM)

    The most beautiful sound of all. Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/7/2016 1:33:00 AM)

    Thanks much KK Sir.

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/4/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    Speechless I am. So many beautiful sounds are dancing in the poem, yet at the end silence is the sound of love! Remarkable work! Rating infinite. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/12/2015 10:46:00 PM)

    Thanks Madam SN.......

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 16, 2016

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