Shall I compare your voice with sweet notes of cuckoo?
Or with the voice of nightingale
Or whistle of a parrot
Or drops of water on tin roof
The melody of love is what I search on
When mother sings lullaby
Angles descend to hear yet they hear not
Thus thy voice resembles mocking bird's voice,
Or is it like Malabar's whistling by a schoolboy
I hear nothing when I see two lovers
Sitting arms in arms without sound
just the silence in between them
When love blossom from the ashes of dunes
There is a complete silence
And this silence is the sound of love.♥
A poetry in motion, I never thought that somebody will try to explore the possible of finding the sound of love, you did it and the result was ultimate, silence is the sound and language both....Great poem, Asim.
While we hear lovers we get something and hear nothing in surprise. Due to sound of love we feel silence too. Very amazing sharing....10
Opening lines resembles Shakespeare's beauty. Loved your poem on 💘
Brilliantly written. First line reminded me the great poet Shakespeare.
What a wonderful choice for the sound of love. Nothing can be better than the Silence.
After color of love now sound of love real creative thinking Asim loved the way you wrote it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Speechless I am. So many beautiful sounds are dancing in the poem, yet at the end silence is the sound of love! Remarkable work! Rating infinite.
Thanks Madam SN.......