Sound Of Love ♥♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sound Of Love ♥♥

Rating: 4.5


Shall I compare your voice with sweet notes of cuckoo?
Or with the voice of nightingale
Or whistle of a parrot
Or drops of water on tin roof
The melody of love is what I search on
When mother sings lullaby
Angles descend to hear yet they hear not
Thus thy voice resembles mocking bird's voice,
Or is it like Malabar's whistling by a schoolboy
I hear nothing when I see two lovers
Sitting arms in arms without sound
just the silence in between them
When love blossom from the ashes of dunes
There is a complete silence
And this silence is the sound of love.♥

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 04 November 2015

Speechless I am. So many beautiful sounds are dancing in the poem, yet at the end silence is the sound of love! Remarkable work! Rating infinite.

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Thanks Madam SN.......

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T Rajan Evol 04 November 2015

A poetry in motion, I never thought that somebody will try to explore the possible of finding the sound of love, you did it and the result was ultimate, silence is the sound and language both....Great poem, Asim.

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M Asim Nehal 24 July 2016

Thx much TRA.......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2015

While we hear lovers we get something and hear nothing in surprise. Due to sound of love we feel silence too. Very amazing sharing....10

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

Opening lines resembles Shakespeare's beauty. Loved your poem on 💘

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Shreya Hacks 27 September 2020

Brilliantly written. First line reminded me the great poet Shakespeare.

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Jasmine Shayma 23 August 2020

What a wonderful choice for the sound of love. Nothing can be better than the Silence.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 July 2020

Excellent poem on love, the sound is unforgetable.

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Suzon Albert 24 July 2020

After color of love now sound of love real creative thinking Asim loved the way you wrote it

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