Sour Wine Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Sour Wine

Rating: 5.0


The virgin dolly bird sings in her vineyard
and the virtuoso listen her arrogant melody
at his cottage window merrily.
The old rusty fence isn't a barrier it seems
if she pass a gentle glance?
The bystander in his fantasy
counting the stars in the mysterious sky.
Wine turned to vinegar
and the lonesome soul still a bachelor.

To my poet friend Dave.Tanguay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 01 September 2006

The tone of this poem is a bit fatatalistic and world weary. But it is very well written, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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