Sovereign Girl … 1905 - 2k13 Poem by saadat tahir

Sovereign Girl … 1905 - 2k13

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Kicked on beach cockle shells
then the office guys to hell

the prickly sand tickles my toes
and his laughter, that he knows

the bosses work I so often do
why I like him, don’t have a clue

late to bed and early to rise
nets me bonus, worldly prize

with the alarm, shoot out of bed
fumble and clamp its button dead

thirty minutes of a race in time
switch on tube to scan the crime

hair and hands tomorrow then
laptop purse and favorite pen

at the bus stop same old scene
a million times I must have seen

I hate their frills and lacy girls
The dumb pouts and their curls

What’s up beat in a gender trap
All they need is a firmly slap

Daunted not by brawn or hurl
Brainy and brash is sovereign girl

Sunday, May 19, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM

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19 May,2k13
Islamabad.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 May 2013

Hmm i dont know whether u r praisin or despisin dat girl here but i give u kudos for d rhymin flow. As for me i tink beautiful workin women r waylaid easily so they shud b careful.

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Yasmin Khan 21 May 2013

I think it's an ode to a girl who is self-assertive and smart and does not like to act coyly. It's written with a feeling of respect for all working girls to keep their morale high. A perfect ten for such a serious at the bottom but written with a light pen composition.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 May 2013

sovereign girl, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

it is seemed to me a funny poem.. but nice with smooth flow and sweet rhymes.. love it.....2

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