Unguarded Word......Think Before U Speak! Poem by saadat tahir

Unguarded Word......Think Before U Speak!

Rating: 3.1

Unguarded word, befriended bird.
Weighted fell by thrice or third.
Dusty grind, millers churn.
Pummel ears, murmurs burn.

Mongered word off china town,
bamboos morph to fretting frown.
Snared enmeshed, wasted sage,
bowl of death at generous age.

Placid morns to sullied days,
rancid slicks on sandy bays.
Bubbly sprays dash and bounce,
buffet sighs in crannies trounce.

Tongues to airs, wings have lent.
Hath words to many, a gallows sent.
Deadened eyes to rainbows womb,
spured fear to tear to life entomb.

Strongest will and hardy soul.
Char and writhe on carmine coal.
Words said, unsaid, worlds apart.
Volley's sent, will raze ramparts

(Aug 01,2009)

Lady Grace 09 August 2009

nicely done.'think before u speak is a good habit..

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Luwi Habte 10 August 2009

think before u speak! , nice idea well penned poem too Luwi

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2009

Fine imageries fine expressions! 10+

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Yelena M. 11 August 2009

Unguarded word...agree with you..though I should be true I often speak before I think..but I work on it.. :) your way with words always amazes me and makes me recite your poems immediately to listen how they sound in air, and to feel the power of sounds on an emotional level..and then to read it some times to get more into an idea..always deep and encouraging..thanks for sharing, Saadat. Amary.

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Seema Aarella 12 August 2009

'A great write' i must say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Yolandey Share 15 December 2017

Really nice stated thank you for sharing and thank you for my comment on abortion

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 October 2016

Words that make or break. Amazing rhymes, indeed.

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Bharati Nayak 08 May 2015

Excellently rhymed each word is a chosen word.A fabulous poem.

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2011

excellent poem.........its superb sir sat...... poem presents ur message in an emphatic manner so i like it very much & also word association supports ur thinking & thought very much i think i rate this poem more than 10000000000000

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 July 2010

Don’t let hang loose your tongue…if you do so you’ll be …well you all know …excellent stuff…perfect wording…loved it Mr. Poet Saadat Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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