writing a poetry
is putting together
scintillating vibes
of words that have
taken refuge in
each man's heart
extracting their charm
and matching them
to create a vibrant
lake of shangrila,
a spa brains far away
can take a dive to soak
up its riveting energy,
and spawn more shangrilas
for the mind to swim
in its creative endearvours
or
writing poetry
is putting together
scintillating vibes
of words that have
taken refuge in each
man's heart and which now
emerge wrapped with
gifts of meanings
the poets could extract
and match to create a vibrant lake of shangrila,
a spa brains far away
can take a dive to soak
up its riveting energy,
and in the endeavour
makes way for more
shangrilas for the mind
to swim in their quest
for - more shangrilas
I really like this idea, John, but this needs work with some of the syntax. I'll write you about what I see here...but what a marvelous idea...a 'spa for the brain.' Very creative! Raynette
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A clever poem John. A poem can be created by a spa of words such as these....10