Space Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Space

Rating: 5.0


Spread wide
Openness
To freedom
Of truth
With passion,

There has to be
If not –
No peace,
No joy,
No idea,
No life to flow.

All will be doomed,
All will be lost,
Unless
That treasure
Is found
Within

For life
To be nurtured
And grow
Into
A center
Of evolution.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillena Cox 12 February 2010

your poem speaks of a passion for life, a life that is dynamic, and open to truth; interesting write

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Marieta Maglas 15 May 2009

It is a splendid visionary poem of life, truth and evolution. ''Spread wide Openness To freedom'' consists with hyperbolic metaphor. ''A center Of evolution'' close the ''circle'' of its idea.Everything inside means contrast.

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