Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

The Sound Of Dreams

The heads of fingers
Loaded
With tons
Of adoration,
Caress
Soft the strings sweet of harp
To send free
The sound of dreams
That metamorphosed
The atmosphere
Into the white zone
Of heaven,
Like the sea still of blue
Dorned in light
By the beam bright of sun.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, July 7, 2011

Add this poem to MyPoemList

Rating Card

4,6 out of 5
38 total ratings
rate this poem

Comments about The Sound Of Dreams by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

  • Krystal Vincent (3/2/2011 11:55:00 PM)

    woooow i am speachless... beautiful beyond what words can express, or what eyes can see or or even for the ear to have heard... u layed ur heart out my friend very beautiful i love it

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Cúcídh Mac Cuagh (3/6/2010 6:35:00 PM)

    A great idea articulated through use of excellent images. Well done!

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Ihab Marzouk (11/5/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    How beautiful. How balm.
    You no doubt really have calm sensibilities and the greatest ones.
    It can almost never would occur to one's minds to write such a poem.
    Your description is very wellk, in addition to the words you used to express things.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Obinna Eruchie (11/5/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    hannah brandeberry (11/4/2009 9: 33: 00 PM)

    I like it :) its deep and passionate :)

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Helen Vorst (11/3/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    i was hooked by 'white zone'. so old and in many ways discribed subject as music appearing here in somewhat sober, technichal words as 'tons' and 'zone', and something else i'm not able to put in thoughts - that is a dream, in true. thank you.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kctony Xtopher Nkwocha (11/2/2009 8:27:00 AM)

    All poets here have said it all. Poetically knitted. I love it.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Clara Odelia Ciutara (11/1/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    very well composed, and written as good as its tittle. Nice..

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Khilil PerryKhilil Perry (10/31/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Very good

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Eyan Desir (10/31/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    A fine and beautiful poem

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Chitra - (10/30/2009 11:08:00 PM)

    a musial metaphor..resonant sounds!

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Breanna Burge (10/30/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    wow your poems are good they are way better than mine
    keep writing and tell me when youve made new ones! !

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (10/30/2009 12:43:00 PM)

    Fantastic.Very nice metaphors and imageries.Ecstasy is heighted by reading the poem.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Amandamae =) (10/30/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    .....Beautiful......

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Indira Babbellapati (10/30/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    a good simile...of the sea and the sun

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dan Leaver (10/30/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    I like your poems, , let me know if you like mine..Hope you will smile when reading them..

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mohammed Hassan (10/29/2009 9:21:00 PM)

    it's very nice one i like your type good work 10+++
    i like the harp i love its sound

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Susan JarvisSusan Jarvis (10/29/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    A melodious and alliterative piece. Just one small point - I think the opening line should read 'tips of fingers' instead of 'heads'. S :)

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Yuanyuan Kelly (10/29/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    pretty good... i like your style of writing

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Joseph Poewhit (10/29/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    Not many people play the harp.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Last hakkaobake (10/29/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    good stuff 'caress soft the sweet of harp' 8

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?