Spinning Poem by Jessy Liz

Spinning

Rating: 5.0


Blinking in and fading out,
Consciousness is high in doubt.
Swimming in a sea of fog,
Sight gives out but not for long.
Waking in a drug-like daze
Darkness captured in your gaze.
Room is spinning, round and round-
Limp, white body hits the ground.

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Isaac Helms 12 May 2006

nice poem short and to the piont sweat poem.. i give it a ten

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