Spinnings Poem by anais vionet

Spinnings

Rating: 4.0


The earth is twirling,
oh, God, make it stop.
If it keeps on spinning,
I think I'll throw up.

The way Earth orbits the sun,
it's dangerous and thoughtless.
can we just knock it off?
It's making me nauseous.

Sunday, December 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mood,science,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
oh, sure, like science can explain EVERYTHING
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The Earth's journey around the Sun is how a year and our seasons are continued..As the Earth spins our days become day and night.Without this motion this planet would be like our Moon- no life..We live on the best planet because it can sustain life.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 20 December 2020

Good one. Yeah sure it can. You keep researching and it will reveal everything.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2020

We all are on a rollercoaster ride.

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